Hi! Let Me Introduce Myself
My name
is Tiara Funny, you can call me Tiara, but there are a lot of people call me
Funny or Tifun because it’s easier for them to remember me. I was born in
Yogyakarta. Now I am a student in Yogyakarta State University and my subject is
English Education. I am a quiet person but I can be a crazy person with them
who very close to me. My hobbies are reading, writing, singing, playing music,
and sport. I am a good learner and sometimes I can be perfectionis. I am a
good listener for everyone who wants to tell their story.
Your story is very interesting and funny to read. I laughed to myself reading it. But there are sentences that I can't understand. In paragraph 1 of the sixth line
BalasHapusHihi, thank you Shafa for your feedback! I'll keep studying to improve my skills to make it more understandable.
HapusHi, Tiara! You've made such a short yet complete introduction. It's pretty good, it won't make the reader feel so misunderstanding when they read your words. But for the 3rd sentence, I think you should change the 'subject' into 'major' because it's more compatible. Keep on fire, Tiara! :)
BalasHapusThank you Fanny for your feedback! I'll keep studying to improve my vocabulary.
HapusHello Tifun! I like the way you tell us about your personality. But in 6th sentence you misspelled a word, it should be "perfectionist" not "perfectionis". Overall it's good, keep going.
BalasHapusHello Angel! Thank you for your feedback! I'll try to be better in the next post!^^
Hapus